Cancer Life

[Lunatic Fringe]

<font color=blue>Malignant feelings spread
Eagle soars unlike me
Fa so la ti don't stop killing
Time to rest
In Peaces
Of glass in my blood
Flow and cut like truth
Hurts the liar I am
Cold like "The galaxy is big."
Is an understatement
Of character for the dead
Men in Thor's chair
Man of the board missing a nail
In the coffin's lid</font>

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"Try setting it to 'Wumpum'"

[Hannibal]

I don't know about this one. Your other works seem so much more precise and slicing, this one is like a bunch of ideas, and thoughts, poured into one. Like a brainstorm gone bad off the deep end of correlations.

Correlations seems to be what the poem is built on, but this could use a lot of elaboration in stepping from one idea to the next I think.

There's just so many ideas, and nothing to tie any of them together...

A twist from your usual I would say, but not for the better.

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As miserable as life may be I hold it pretty precious...

If I lose the light of the sun, I will write by candlelight, moonlight, no light. If I lose paper and ink, I wil write in blood on forgotten walls. I will write always, I will capture nights all over the world and bring them to you.
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[SHATOUSHKA]

i still like it.

leave it alone.

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~~share some greased tea with me~~
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